Tuesday, February 4, 2014

She Comments

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She stops going to school,
She stops talking with friends,
Shes about to go over the edge,
One friend says its just a phase,
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Taylor Ingram
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Susan Lacovara 04 February 2014

What an intense poem, and even more so, the sad fact that young people today, often feel so very alone and invisible. I am glad your heartfelt write saved your friend. Words are indeed powerful...be them bitter or sweet...practice more kindness, my advice to the world... Well done and I wish you and your friend PEACE.

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