Monday, February 22, 2016

She's Not A Baby Anymore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Morning has come and my eyes slightly open to see the ray of sunshine on her precious face
Golden curls abundantly swirling on the pillow
Cheeks rosy red and lips as pretty as a budding flower
Bright blue eyes as crisp as the ocean staring back at me.
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Chinedu Dike 02 March 2016

Beautiful depiction of doting mum's love, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. An insightful portrayal of the simile: 'As soft as mother's love'. Thanks for sharing Shannon. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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