Monday, July 13, 2009

Shedding Not A Single Tear Comments

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Every year goes by…
Without me shedding a single tear
Every minute goes by…
With me wishing I could shed a tear
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Casey Lyon
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Shekhar Joshi 14 July 2009

last para is excellent and stands out from the rest........though the whole poem is good........ liked it....good work....... ;)

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Danny H 13 July 2009

Your probaly like me, Numb. 75% of the time unless im with my boyfriend. or some moments i can feel everything, all the emotions bottled up but most of the time, i can cry when i want to, my eyes just water sometimes they wont even water it could take up to a day, a week, a month for me to break down about something that someone normaly breaks down at the moment. Loved the poem, internal and external pain lies in every word: 10+

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