Friday, August 25, 2023

Shikata Ga Nai Comments

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Cant save a flame when the wicks been licked
or hold the tide where the sandcastles swept
There's no use crying, when summer lies dying
The arrow wont pause and the future never slept
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2023

A very moving and well expressed poem, Kevin. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2023

Each and every line of this wonderful poem help us to navigate our journey in life with resilience. Acceptance of what can't be changed is a powerful principle that allow us to focus on important things to enable us to move forward with greater determination.

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