Friday, July 4, 2014

Shine The Brightest Comments

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I think it's quite unfair how they get to shine
They shine to taunt me with how high they are
They dance and gallop in the sky as the wind blows them along
Oh, how jealous I am of how they know they don't need the day to shine
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Brielle Aponte
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Piyush Dey 04 July 2014

'I'm not jealous of those stars anymore Because I know I'm already one of them' it was a beautiful poem. i liked the imagery. nice one. keep writing.

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