Shady ElShafie

Rookie - 10 Points (Russia, St-Petersburg)

Should I - Poem by Shady ElShafie

Living in dark where no lights on
Simulating my pain where no heart on
Even though not ready
Not ready for the war inside
Darkness overwhelmed my consciuosness
So should i trust you or you
Paranoid by fear being
Backstapped with all what i gave you!

Comments about Should I by Shady ElShafie

  • (5/11/2010 4:20:00 AM)

    great job. short but sweet. if my comp worked i would give you a 10! (Report) Reply

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  • (5/8/2010 4:11:00 AM)

    Quite good style. Keep on writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 3, 2010

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