Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Shut Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life knocked at my door
But there was a lock on it
A lack of imagination prevented windows
Alack of faith stopped ventilation
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

Beyond the door there may be fields Perhaps a river or two There maybe waterfalls and rainbow life came and i forgot to open the door.......... a powerful sentence which makes the reader think and flow into wild imagination....... but life will come again and then please open the door......... thank you. tony

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Utsav Patel 09 April 2013

Its nice... Its indeed deep...

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