Saturday, October 31, 2009

Silence The Blade Comments

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As I sit there waiting for tears to rush down,
I suddenly find the reasoning through the crowd,
My arms long for the blade I call my friend,
I need to touch it to my skin creating to best sin,
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Melissa Franks
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Dylan Oppedahl 31 October 2009

I like the story and you did really well through poetry. I like the panic feeling at the end and then you kind of make it all calm. Great piece

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Melissa Franks

Melissa Franks

Shreveport
Melissa Franks
Melissa Franks
Shreveport
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