Silent Fear Poem by Amanda Testino

Silent Fear

Rating: 5.0


Her face in fright silently waiting,
Conscious conflicts strong enough to lose her sanity,
The feeling of guilt and responsibility,
The games they play they play silently,

She waits with lighted cigarette thinking of possibilities,
Perhaps out of existence there is a strong sense of right and wrong,
Here, all that exists are bodies blood and raw,
Afternoon comes slowly to sleep is fear,

They fight for freedom for it is better to fight and die than live under oppression and fear,
Young men waiting, survivors they are,
Perhaps they survive as the chopper comes,

Those survivors are shot, shot on the ground,
Fear of dying silently waits, you light a cigarette waiting for the break of day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mitchell Greenwood 16 February 2007

This is terrific, Amanda. I love the descriptive way your work speaks out.

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Max Spector 16 February 2007

I like how you describe the emptiness the subjects feels i can relate

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