Silent Tears Poem by Christopher Holden

Silent Tears

Rating: 5.0


How could you do this to me? You knew what it would make me do.
Leaving me like that. I practically worshiped you.
You said you'd never leave me. That you'd always be there for me.
I know I messed up. I know I made mistakes.
How did your love suddenly turn into hate? I wanted to be just like you.
Wanted to do the things you did. It’s so messed up.
I was just a little kid.
The day you went away, part of me followed.
I broke down inside. I became hollow.
Nothing could get through. Nothing could get inside.
Until the day you come back I will silently cry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alice sunderland 30 October 2006

hey, i finally found your poems. gave it a ten. emotional dynamite.

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nn mn 26 October 2006

'Wanted to do the thinks you did.' Did you mean 'things'? 'Until the day you came back' - Sounds better with 'come back'. ANOTHER GREAT CREATION! Keep on writing, my friend. You are very gifted! BRAVO! !

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