How could you do this to me? You knew what it would make me do.
Leaving me like that. I practically worshiped you.
You said you'd never leave me. That you'd always be there for me.
I know I messed up. I know I made mistakes.
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'Wanted to do the thinks you did.' Did you mean 'things'? 'Until the day you came back' - Sounds better with 'come back'. ANOTHER GREAT CREATION! Keep on writing, my friend. You are very gifted! BRAVO! !
hey, i finally found your poems. gave it a ten. emotional dynamite.