Monday, March 30, 2009

Simply Love. Comments

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The clouds open up each day
to reveal your perfect smile,
the wind flows free reassuring
that your there watching over me.
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Jodie Foster
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Wesley Dale Willis 18 May 2020

I loved your poem " Simply Love" In the second stanza last line everything is spelled wrong. It sounded bad when the reader read it. I'm writing a book of poetry Jody. Could I get you as a commenter on it. Outskirts Press is putting it together for me.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 March 2009

The clouds open up each day to reveal your perfect smile, the wind flows free reassuring that your there watching over me. Wonderful start for a poem which is simply love, but love is an endless phenomenon and you can never stop loving......Good write, Jodie. Keep on loving and keep on writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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