Sin Poem by Patience Connelley

Sin



You will live in sin, in your life
If all you do with your life, is avoid sin.
My goal is to stop caring about sin
While caring more about life.
It's so interesting to strip a teenager for his/her home,
Clothes, social status and other things
In order to preserve the other person's freedom and
Individuality.
Giving them the ways of society
Rather than giving them their own ways.
Life's crulety is to be forced to forget everything
In exchange for worldly riches.
Sin should only be the result
In the end, not the focus of life.
The world lives according to sin
Rather than life in accordance to life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Wheeler 13 January 2010

Genius, Genius, GENIIIIUSSSS! Thats supposed to be said the same way that the opera guy in Mr. Deeds says it. I'm sort of a movie buff. I like the power of this poem quite a bit though and I'm surprised no one has left a comment about it yet. Please comment on some of mine if you can. I promise theyre not that bad.

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