Sunday, August 21, 2011

Sing To Me Comments

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Sing to me sweet siren

lay me in your arms
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Melissa Buhagiar
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Marva Seaton 21 August 2011

Melissa I think I understand what you are trying to say, but wouldn't it be better to stick with one subject; so instead of ''sweet siren, sweet angel, and my lover'' you choose the subject that relates best to what you are trying to express and in this case it would be ''my lover'' nice poem though.

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Lexi Stevens 21 August 2011

Love it Liss I hope to see many more because Mel Mel your poems are swell

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