Melissa I think I understand what you are trying to say, but wouldn't it be better to stick with one subject; so instead of ''sweet siren, sweet angel, and my lover'' you choose the subject that relates best to what you are trying to express and in this case it would be ''my lover'' nice poem though.
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Melissa I think I understand what you are trying to say, but wouldn't it be better to stick with one subject; so instead of ''sweet siren, sweet angel, and my lover'' you choose the subject that relates best to what you are trying to express and in this case it would be ''my lover'' nice poem though.