Sinking Poem by Brian Hinckley

Sinking

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Air fades,
only darkness remains.
Watching light fade above,
Sinking.

Time ceases,
memories flood.
Trying to scream,
no sound escapes.

Pulled free,
light rushing around me.
Helping hands vanish
as I begin to sink again.

All I get is dragged
up and down.
No respite,
I resign to my fate.

Drawing in,
I sink faster.
I wish others
to never see a fate like mine.

Sunday, July 13, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: flood,fate
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Brian Hinckley

Brian Hinckley

Buffalo, New York
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