Sixteen-Syllables- Thought On Spring Night 2 Poem by Cotter Li

Sixteen-Syllables- Thought On Spring Night 2



Sad
The past bad
With lots of thoughts in my head
And no one I had.

on Feb.9,2016

Sunday, May 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 01 May 2016

Sometimes it's possible to say a lot with a little. I can relate to these 16 syllables. Reminds me of a not so long ago rough patch when loneliness was all around me no matter how many people were nearby. Good poem

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Cotter Li 01 May 2016

We have consonance.

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Cotter Li

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Fuyang, Anhui Province, China
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