Wednesday, January 7, 2015

Skiing Comments

Rating: 4.5

The ill twinging of chills leading to thrill,
spreading through my icy bones on the hill.
Mucus will freeze with immaculate ease,
all thanks to Sir Winters deathly cool breeze.
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Chinedu Dike 08 January 2015

Good train of thoughts encapsulated into a nice poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 January 2015

beautiful and fine, I like it, thanks. Please read my poems..

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