Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Sky Sahler Comments

Rating: 5.0

Abandon ship,
We're airborne but the engine is stalling.
With one tiny slip,
My whole world is suddenly falling.
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Katty Livingston
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Crimson Love 06 December 2011

Very vivid imagery in this piece, very well written, truly you have come up with some immaculate lines. 'Till I'm almost crawling- So I'm not really going anywhere. I'll write your name in the clouds, As I'm inching my way down.' Beautiful. :)

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