Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Slap Myself Comments

Rating: 3.0

i sit here by myself
with this burning feeling inside of me
it's telling me im all alone
theres nobody else just me
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jessie davies
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 September 2008

I can't recommend this. The title didn't fit the poem I thought. I don't know what I imagined it was, but the poem was unexpected. The poem was actually more than the title. But that is not good either. The expectation of the reader plays a part. I just think it was ignored. GW62

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Ridwan Owo 20 August 2008

great peom but on the third paragraphs is god, God

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