Sunday, November 18, 2012

Slices Of Brain Comments

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Third anniversary of my mother's death from dementia,
And I'm looking at slices of brain, stained pretty pink,
The neurones purplish, their nuclei clear as strawberry pips.
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Valerie Laws
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Bri Edwards 17 March 2019

i believe you meant " anymore" at the end, not " any more" . and maybe Amyloid, not Ameloid, but, hey, i'm American. ha ha. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2019

i've had this in MyPoemList about 7 years, but i see no comment below for some reason. am i demented/daft? ? i'm adding this to my in-progress April showcase of poems, this month of the British Isles. bri :) Thanks.

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