Sunday, July 26, 2009

Slight Shadow. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shadow
that parts us
..........is slight.
starting
...
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 04 August 2009

One is in darkness the other in light time is the difference between day and night paths of darkness do often collide when someone special is close by your side

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Carol Gall 26 July 2009

a well written poem emotions run

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Sue Sie 26 July 2009

Like the format of this one Fay...a very interesting verse, ,10++ Sue

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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