Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Slightly Medical Comments

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Imaginary - Acrostic

Having suffered an ache and a pain...
Yelps and yowls again and again,
...
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Joyce Hemsley
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Barbara Terry 21 January 2009

We can heal in the hydrotherapy of the Lord, and let him engulf us, and swim all around our every aching muscle. We can rejoice that in this hydrtherapy of the Lord, that happy moments are here with us, and will never leave us in pain. This is a very well thought out piece, and leaves the reader to think. And I agree that the puppy needs therapy too in the form of our love and support. Thank you for sharing, ad this gets a 10+ from me. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Martin O'Neill 21 January 2009

Aahh! Relief! A gentle, amusing poem after a load of angst fuelled syntactically challenged tripe! Thank you for bringing a smile to my face!

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Joyce Hemsley

Joyce Hemsley

Portsmouth England
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