Thursday, December 18, 2014

Slipping, Sliding Comments

Rating: 4.3

As I watch the hours pass,
Slipping, Sliding
As I watch my life pass by
Slipping, Sliding
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Ann Clark
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 18 December 2014

Loved the ending of the poem. Didn't see it coming.

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Chinedu Dike 18 December 2014

A beautiful train of thoughts well encapsulated into a lovely poem. The essence of poetry is to capture ones thoughts beautifully in few words, you just did that. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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