Monday, June 15, 2009

Snap, Crackle, Pop Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the fourth of July the waves crash and splatter into shore.
A fire burns with the cracking and popping of wood.
Under the blanket you can feel the sand squish and move.
The bang and the boom in the dark sky.
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Jasmine Robert
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Ramos 16 October 2018

THIS IS FAKE! YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO WRITE SUCH WRONG POEM TITLES!

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Reading this makes me feel like I am right there experiencing the fun and excitement of the fourth of July.

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Marieta Maglas 15 June 2009

penned with long sentences underpinned with stanzaic pattern linked to easy diction...10+

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Jasmine Robert

Jasmine Robert

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