Thursday, March 1, 2018

Snowfall Comments

Rating: 5.0

Particulate as ash, new year's first snow falls
upon peaked roofs, car hoods, undulant hills,
in imitation of motion that moves the way

static cascades down screens when the cable
zaps out, persistent & granular with a flicker
of legibility that dissipates before it can be

interpolated into any succession of imagery.
One hour stretches sixty minutes into a field
of white flurry: hexagonal lattices of water

molecules that accumulate in drifts too soon
strewn with sand, hewn into browning
mounds by plow blade, left to turn to slush.
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Ravi Shankar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2018

Experiencing snowfall is really amazing. This poem is very brilliant penned...10

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