So Many In Vain, Reasonless Relationships (Song) Poem by Britney Hogue

So Many In Vain, Reasonless Relationships (Song)

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This was all such vanity,
Without the slightest purpose,
Without a half decent reason.
Like so many others seen today,
Our relationship was a lie.

It took me quite some years,
But I saw right through you,
And all the damaging fibs
You plagued me with throughout.
This, before you stole my innocents.

I was one of the smart,
Or was I one of the strong.
One who wasn’t afraid of you,
Or one that was too stubborn
To live with your unfaithfulness.

So many relationships like ours.
Where she is dealt this affair,
But most are not strong like I.
To leave you in your own despair,
And go about my own peaceful life.

I was one of the smart,
Or was I one of the strong?
One who wasn’t afraid of you,
Or one that was too stubborn
To live with your unfaithfulness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 06 May 2009

it's always like our weakness being their strength...100% to the maturity of ur thought, young lady!

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I can see what a great song this would be. It is so carefully crafted and well rounded up in the last stanza too! 10 or top writing Karin Anderson

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James B. Earley 04 May 2009

Having said all that, I just know that you feel a lot better now! Excellent composition.

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Michael Gale 04 May 2009

Great poem Britney. Gave ya a ten! God bless us all-MJG.

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