Max Saysoff

Rookie (05/01/95 / kansas)

So This Is How It End's Iv Given Up - Poem by Max Saysoff

so this is the end
my rope is cut
all thank I'm not done
for the first time
i am the one who has said i was done
it is not that I do not love you
its that i do not love who you have become
and who you have aloud yourself to become
i love the jordan that was sweet and kind
the nice girl with a mind of her own
not the girl you have become
a girl that freely does wrong
this is what you have become
I was the one who tried to stop it
but He has aloud it to become
you both say He is better
look at what you have done
the day we meet
this is what you didn't what
this is what you tried not to become
yet
for HIM
you have gone this far
i guess i really am secant place
i cut my line
let you go and i turn around
'I' have had enough


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  • (4/25/2010 1:18:00 PM)


    sniff8 this is really sad! ! i love this poem...10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 25, 2010



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