Soldier Poem by Kayla Lines

Soldier

Rating: 5.0


The Streets are scarlet,
the rivers run red,
once noble fighters
are now all dead

Bright Flashing light
loud peircing boom
another soldier meets his doom

This senseless fighting
make it stop
a chilling sight
as bodies drop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 22 July 2009

This senseless fighting make it stop a chilling sight as bodies dropp this stanza of this rich poem is making me think that you have much more in your brain to paint on paper with words being a true artist..and you seem to me artistic one.. the ideas you are presenting are wonderful and soul tocuhing ones..well done..pray for your long life and happy smiles...

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