Jay P Narain

Freshman - 578 Points (Jan.1945 / Bihar, India)

Solitude - Poem by Jay P Narain

The pain of loneliness fettered me for a while,
I felt like a wandering blind man looking for sunshine,
I saw the pain of leaves departing from trees in the chilly fall nights,
I heard the murmur of rain drops falling from the dark menacing clouds.

It was all so quiet all around me,
There was nothing to say or hear about me,
I was living dead looking for a glimpse of life,
My soul was entrapped in the cage of solitude.

Now free from shackles of loneliness,
When I search for happiness in my soul,
My heart again longs for the peace and tranquility of solitude,
Where my thoughts would soar like eagle in deep blue skies,
Where I would be with me and my soul on a distant mountain top,

Now when I seek to discover and be in peace with myself,
I find solitude a bliss which heals my soul,
But how can I forget those haunting lonely days,
When solitude was a curse igniting the flames of desolation in my broken heart.


Comments about Solitude by Jay P Narain

  • Dafina Fetahu (2/2/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    No one deserve a solitury life, my life it's yours, your life it's mine.So take this as an example.When I talk about me, i'm saying about you (Report)Reply

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  • Lalay Allan (1/24/2009 4:27:00 AM)

    I like this very much. It moves my soul. (Report)Reply

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  • Erik Kåberg (1/14/2009 3:06:00 PM)

    Very good, i can really relate, the fear of both sides, not sure were you will be best off (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 12, 2008


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