Solitudes Moon Poem by Kevin Patrick

Solitudes Moon

Rating: 5.0

The moon is full, firm and taut tonight...
But without you it is still only half
The cold beam of an empty vessel
Shackled under a tide of shadows
Waiting for your sweet caresses
Which come now as cruel memories
Lingering for your nimble fingers
That traced around my hungry navel
As you swallowed me in a halo
Of effervescent sweet delight


I look to the moon for your tender warmth
Feeling this void that keeps me numb
Waiting on this bed like a lonely sailor
Cruising his wet dreams that never come

Wednesday, January 1, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2025

Powerful metaphor and vivid imagery so very effectively communicate the writer's loneliness!

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