Monday, March 11, 2019

Some Dance Comments

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Some dance to remember
the past that's already gone
cast to the realms that are beyond
some dance to forget
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Sean Green
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C F 11 March 2019

Very nicely written, love your last stanza: each memory asks for its balm soothed by loss or by gain something pure in each refrain asking another to be played partners found to be held if only to stay in that place

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