Saturday, March 28, 2009

Some-Umm... Comments

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Sometime somewhere someone had
Something somewhat unusual
Somehow it was something he kept
Until he found that someone special
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Arvie Calimlim
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Danzen D. 28 March 2009

Wonderful! *smile*. Nice rhyme and clever use of words. Nice story too, hehe. Somehow, some poems have that certain something in them that makes them special...they somehow show some pieces of the heart. Smile!

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