Something Is Changing Poem by Tim Vallie

Something Is Changing

Rating: 4.5


Something is changing
Something deep down inside
Something is growing
And I just can’t hide
I feel the monster
The beast in me
Waiting for his chance
Looking to break free
All it takes is one mistake
One wrong step
And I’ll just break
While He breaks free
He’ll take control
He’ll be let loose
He’ll ruin me
Kill me
Replace me
And cage me up
Like I did him
It’s all just a game
And he’s bound to win…..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marama Kelly 27 December 2008

This is really emotive and the imagery that comes forth shows one who is cool, calm and collected on the outside, but inside a turmoil is developing and is ready to explode like a volcano. The good and proper standing held and maintained is starting to buckle under the whims, desires and lusts of the soul, pushing to be freed from the prison of righteousness, propriety and dignity. The knowledge deep inside that has taken hold in the mind is, the release will come eventually because in truth such propriety is binding and restrained. There was a good flow and rhythmn in this, well worded and well expressed. Well done. Many blessings to you

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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