Sometimes Poem by Sweet Carolina

Sometimes

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes;
I have to catch myself,
from looking to hard,
ya know it's not polite
to stare.

But how can I
resist
when it's you
looking so handsome
over there.

I hope you don't mind
if from time to time
I have to catch my breath.

Admiration or I guess adoration shouldn't cause ones death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 March 2024

WELCOME to PH, not the best site probably, but it is where I plan to stay! ! ! ! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 08 March 2024

[it was probably a typo; it happens to 'all of us'] I give *****. Good heavens! Let's hope 'death' won't be caused (directly at least) by admiration OR adoration. Yikes! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 08 March 2024

'from looking to hard, ' Sweet Carolina, welcome to PH. 'too' is what you 'want'.

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Sweet Carolina 21 March 2024

Thanks love btw what did you think of the poem. I actually wrote the poem on a train ride to work one wim

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