Thursday, February 20, 2014

Somnambulant Halfway House Comments

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Via some somnambulant
halfway
house of mind and body...
the chin kisses both
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Daniel Y. 20 February 2014

A lot of technical lexis, and an amazing style. I'm confused about it's meaning, but in awe of it's terseness: a mix of complexity and simplicity. Perhaps it's about circles in general. But a somnambulist halfway house is just such a loaded, heavy semantic! Then the word choice of impaled, and kisses, perhaps convey transition? I liked this poem, please read some of mine!

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