Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Sonnet To Lost Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

'I watched from afar as you held her hand,
As a true smile, your face finally had,
Your story of love, truly ever grand,
One I read with my heart blue and sad.
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Franchesca Mia Tortoza
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Chinedu Dike 06 September 2016

Beautiful portrayal of love as a voyage of pure bliss - a mighty spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. An insightful depiction of selfless compromise made in order to foster the happiness of a union made in heaven. Lovely poem nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Franchesca.

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Franchesca Mia Tortoza 07 September 2016

Thank you!

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