Thursday, December 4, 2008

Sounds Unseen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water on the moonlit lake is smooth.
So smooth, surface ripples swirl
In diverse directions from an invisible hand
Of the breeze which I neither hear nor feel.
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Ron Kilgore
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Matt Johnston 08 December 2008

You paint a fine picture here; no need for interpretation, the relaying is enough. The man raising his voice for some unknown reason is a very nice touch.

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