Sunday, July 10, 2011

Spatial Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I consume worlds,
I’m waylaid by the gravity;
The galaxies unfurled,
Creation fills its cavity,
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 14 July 2011

You write like a dream; -another dimension of worlds filled with words that flow like water. You must have oceans of thoughts, ideas and visions swimming endlessly in your soul. Don't ever stop.

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Callum Leckie 12 July 2011

I love this poem short stark and powerful.

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