Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Speak To Me, My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The times I've called on the telephone
Only to be told that, you're not at home.
I wonder why I bother at all
when you are never there
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
COMMENTS
Tanya Stanford 04 October 2008

Aah it made me sad. I know that was the intention. Brilliant write. I really enjoyed it alot.

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Melvina Germain 09 February 2008

Beautiful and sad, just thinking of someone calling and not having the calls answered or returned is very sad indeed. It tears at the heart-strings and I think many of us have been there at one time or other. Another wonderful poem, really beautiful. Melvina

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Alison Cassidy 05 February 2008

This romantic, soulful poem shares that universal longing for the pingpong ball of true love to bounce back, even if the answer in 'no'. A beautiful corroborative effort from three extra lovable souls. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Thad Wilk 05 February 2008

Nice poem JoAnn, David And Meggie! Sounds like a one sided love affair there! *10*! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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Sandra Fowler 05 February 2008

Wistful, poignant and bittersweet. Three souls in tune indeed. Ten from me. Warmest regards, Sandra

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