sam, corrupt S, finley

Rookie (1991 / united states)

Spinning And Grinning - Poem by sam, corrupt S, finley

baby girl you can make me spin
You can also really make me grin
Loving you because you're playful
And because you're not that hateful
Also i can't help but love your beautiful voice
If I could change it ever it wouldn't be a choice
I really really would like to see you
And I bet you would like too see me too
I think some chick said you have nice boobs and butt
Wouldn't matter either way you know I'm love struck
Would you hate me if you I never talked to?
I'd hate myself if I never did to its quite true
I just can't go through a day without you to think about
But why do you want to talk to me anyway I'm a lout
Not complaining just that nobody likes me
To think a girl like you might makes me go gee
Sometimes I want to talk to you but got nothing to say
Just to listen to you really makes me happy either way
So many times I wanted to call
But I just had nothing to say at all
Because I'd get really sad when I think you're alone
Then I'd keep you company till someone got home
What am I saying they'd never leave or just disappear?
But if they ever did you can count on me I would be here
If you start to hate me again I'd probably deserve it
Because I know I'm pushing it each and every bit
I care about you with all my heart
If you made me stop I'd fall apart
You know all I really want is to get your attention
Saying I love you and saying what I'd like to mention
I just lost a friend yesterday and now I'm sad
But I still got you baby girl so that isn't so bad
If I lost you I'd be lost and i would have no one by my side
if i ever said i didn't love you then well news flash i lied
Please don't leave me and I'll promise I'll never to leave you
How could I leave seriously for that's something I could never do
You have no Idea what you mean to me
I really would die for you I ain't kidding
And I really ain't like a pimp that's complex
I'm not the kind of guy who's lustin for sex
You wouldn't find many guys like me at all
If you told me to I'd get on my knees and crawl
Once again I have to say good-bye
Sorry hope you like this at least I try
And there are some times I can be shy
Just a little something well that's it bye


Comments about Spinning And Grinning by sam, corrupt S, finley

  • (3/19/2006 12:11:00 AM)


    Hey Sam,
    you are anything but.
    Please try not to talk down about yourself.
    Okay, first up: you got up enough nerve to post what you have written.
    Now, you know the mechanics of ryhming, that is evident in your work.
    And there is an innate flow of language in your lines.
    These are things you can work with.
    I have been looking at several of my earlier poems and realise that we all
    start somewhere.... the key is to keep going and to keep growing as we go.
    So, let me leave this here and move on to my next read..... some of your
    other work.
    Let this encourage you to pursue your goal. If you are serious about writing -
    you will persevere.
    Freds.
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  • (3/18/2006 7:20:00 PM)


    How sweet. Speak form the heart

    Patricia
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, May 5, 2006


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