sam, corrupt S, finley

Rookie (1991 / united states)

Beautiful... - Poem by sam, corrupt S, finley

[Me] I see long hair in front of me
So beautiful that I can’t see
She walks away so I go and try to forget her
I went for a walk but there she is crying
There’s no one around to make her feel better
Why are you crying I asked just trying?
[Girl] Huh? Oh because I’m not beautiful
[Me] I couldn’t believe it so I was truthful
You are beautiful why would you say that?
[Girl] *Smiles* because that’s the way everybody acts
I just don’t understand it it’s like nobody ever sees me
I feel so alone in world where there is no one laughing
But I guess someone finally sees me *laughs*
[Me] I’m sorry that you don’t feel happy
I’m sure it will get better cheer up please
You’re beautiful I felt bad for staring before
But I can’t stand seeing a girl cry you see
It makes me sad seeing a girl cry but I’m a dork *laughs*
[Girl] You’re just saying that if you think that I am you’ve lost it
You just won’t admit it I’m not beautiful I’m a stupid twit
[Me] no I’m not I almost ran into the wall just looking at you
Well I got to go try to be happier and don’t be so blue
[Girl] wait please tell me your name
[Me] huh? Its sam
[Girl] thank you i feel better now bye
I must go as well I live up real high bye *whoosh*
[Me]……she’s gone she was an angel that had fallen from the sky
Heh heh so beautiful I should have known
The angel in the world that felt all alone


Comments about Beautiful... by sam, corrupt S, finley

  • (11/12/2006 12:17:00 AM)


    jeez, i'm so cheesy, and, yeah, i'm a dork heh, heh. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/11/2006 11:47:00 PM)


    ' Fabulous ' nice job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 25, 2006


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