Thursday, August 25, 2016

Spiritual Journey Comments

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This is the song of my life; I want to do this right.
I wish it were like the mountains, drinking from cool clear fountains;
but my life is cold, and the mess I'm in is getting old.
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Jimmy L. Lyons
journey song Mountains
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Douglas Scotney 25 August 2016

In the last line you let go of all that rhyme control you had in the rest

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 25 August 2016

I am impressed by this write. Thanks poet Jimmy.10!

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