Friday, September 5, 2008

Spring Water Comments

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Joe Smith works at the Spring Water Plant, in Tacoma.
All his life, everyone called him Joe Smith.
Never just Joe.
It makes him feel generic.
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John M. FitzGerald
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Dee Daffodil 05 September 2008

Oh My Gosh! ! This is just too spooky! ! ! I've often had a terrible thought that if terrorists wanted to target a significant number of people this would be one way...scarey isn't it! ! ? This Joe Smith character...could prove to be one very interesting fellow...do we see him show up in more of your poems? ? Great work! Hugs, Dee

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