Stab Me Right Here. Poem by Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose

Stab Me Right Here.



I knw wat u're tinkin
I knw wats in ur mind
Its been long u reached me
Its been long u smiled
I'l tel u wit a straight face
Sinc there's notin to hide U want to break my heart
But u can not do dat
Cos i'v been notin bt good to u
I'v never cheated
I lov u and u knw it
But here is my heart Break it!
Its been broken befor
So it would be easy for u
Stab it right here
It been stabed many time ryt there
So u cant miss it It wil hurt real bad
But hey, it is not d first time
Dont worry it wil bleed
So u will hav d pleasur it wil giv
My heart has cried many time
So it can cry also for u Stab it ryt here
Its most tender there and u cant mis it
God it wil hurt
But not becos u lov me
But cos i lov u and lost u.
Jus tel me u dont lov me any more Its ok, its al d weapon u need
Its a sharp dagger
It will cut smoothly through
Its cold as ice
Dis dagger of words
So stab it ryt here It has been stabed many tyms there bfor
So it would b tender and u cant miss
Oh it wil heal lik it always does
But a scare wil remain lik it alwys does
But urs wil be prominent
It wil be seen first It wil overshadow others dont worry.
I love u so much
I giv u my heart
Wat else do u want dat i wld not giv
Wel i gues i'v givn u al
Its tym u left as there is notin left to take U cant break my heart
Cos i'v been notin but true to u
But i can hear it in ur silence
I feel it frm evry word u say
I hav a tender heart
It means i feel tins clearer I knew d day u stoped lovin me
I gues i knew bfor u admitted to urself
Its takin too long
I cant bear d pain anymor
Cnt bear to knw u dont lov me anymore
D distanc btwn ur spirit now Is far more dan d one btw our bodies
But knw onetin
I never moved,
U did.
So break my heart
It has been broken bfor. It wil be easy for u to break,
Stab it ryt here where,
it is most tender there.
U wont miss
It wil bleed and hurt
But not bcos u stabed me, Not bcos u broke it,
No it bcos i loved u and lost u.
Stab me ryt here
U cant mis.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
she wants to leave i knw... I lov her but i hav to let her go
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Stylos 02 January 2013

If I were her and I stumbled upon such a note, I think I will retrace my step. I love the emotions gushing out of your words, Heart break for someone I love is a big price to pay especially when I am the unloved

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