Ram Krishna Singh

Freshman - 745 Points (31 December 1950 / Varanasi, Uttar Pradesh, India)

Stains Stay Like Sin - Poem by Ram Krishna Singh

Layers of dust thicken
on the mirror water makes
the smuts prominent:
I wipe and wipe and yet
the stains stay like sin

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  • (7/27/2005 7:57:00 AM)

    The only suggestion I have is to maybe to change your line breaks a bit in the first few lines...maybe like this?

    Layers of dust
    thickner on the mirror
    water makes the smuts

    I like what you are saying here just think it needs different line breaks to make it easier to read. But that's just one thought. I could be wrong.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 27, 2005

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