Sunday, February 19, 2006

Stay Quiet Until You'Re Gone Comments

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Yes, yes
Just lay here quietly my dear
Don’t make a sound and you won’t feel a thing
Do ignore all the questionable sounds you hear
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Joy Vanderhelm 19 February 2006

I like the ominous tone to this. But, I feel it was a little too obscure, I can't glean what exactly is being portrayed and there's no real symbolism or description to add a picture, though it is true that every reader can take a different thing away from a given poem. Its sinister edge gave me a chill, though. All in all a fine effort for the emotion it brings forth.

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