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Stay With Me - Poem by shtnykook69 death

Stay here with me,
I'm not whole without you.
Can't you see?
Please don't go away
I'll do anything to make you stay.
If you must leave,
Don't go far.
You're my falling star.
My knight and shining armor.
Stay here forever leave me never.
You treated me with such kindness,
I didn't want anyone or any less.
I just want you and you alone,
I only want to hear your voices tone.
And see your eyes full of blue,
Because I love you
And I want you to be near.


Comments about Stay With Me by shtnykook69 death

  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/22/2008 1:28:00 PM)

    My knight and shining armor...............
    love wishful by the thrills of heart
    passion overwhelms by desire
    yet it whispers kisses by silky breath
    eyes meanders in redolence by blues...........wonderful epithet of love in resilience, eloquence flows by the passin, ingeniously luscious, heart yet paints the art of love, yet wrought superbly by imagery,10+, thankas for sharing
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  • Tanya Stanford (10/9/2008 8:01:00 AM)

    This is so beautiful. True love emotion flows out of the word use. Lovely composition. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 9, 2008



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