Stealing My Mind... Poem by layne narrowes

Stealing My Mind...



delayed by chance
he set out to pounce
and, lo & behold
there's the story in the shadow

ripping and tearing
and cursing and swearing
to be quite unnerving
pinning down the subversive

enter his mind
press rewind
to point of re-find
whispered slowly to remind

i remained behind
to hold the line
stop the crime
of stealing my mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Weezze ... 07 February 2008

Interesting. I take it its meant to say shadow in the first verse.

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Erin Duphily 07 February 2008

I enjoy the way you put this together. Thank you very much! ! !

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rock hill, south carolina
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