Steamy Cups And Sending Love Poem by I Am Here

Steamy Cups And Sending Love



I remember I used
To keep a secret Stash
Of tea and honey just for thee
When they were sickly
A simple thought
But ment from heart
To show a care
And some help
Little as it was
It was a simple love

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I think the little proofs count just as much as big ones so this is a little one. I kept tea and honey for you for when you were sick and i would make it before i saw you in my own cup. I would make it right before so it was hot.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 02 June 2013

a few problems here. Why Stash not stash? why the use of thee and not you, why ment? so a good idea that needs some work..

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