Sunday, May 21, 2017

Step-Father 1906-1968 Comments

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That last time I saw you,
cancer ridden, gaunt, no
longer the strong man
I remembered as a kid.
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Terry Collett
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Jefferson Carter 21 May 2017

Terry, I like this and I'm very, very picky. It's restrained but vivid where it needs to be and the line breaks are good. Nice one. If you're interested, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. YRs, JC

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Terry Collett

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